stuck in school

before

I opened the door and there were kids everywhere. Boys

were climbing out the window and there were paper planes all over the place. My best friend Anna was holding one of the rats from the science lab and the rest were running all over the room. Anna told me there were no teachers none at all.

after

I opened the door to the classroom at full speed. ‘’Duck! yelled matt and a huge paper plane came diving right at my head. ‘come on’. Jack was halfway out the window, two boys were right behind him. My best friend Anna was holding one of the rats from the science lab the rest were running everywhere. ‘what happening? I asked her. There’s no teacher, she cried. None at all ! then my heart beats faster and faster and faster.

The kids stop running and stood still like an ice block. Suddenly all the rats leapt out of the window. Then the kids leapt out of the window.

It felt like the rats ran around the field hundreds and hundreds of times.

Then suddenly we heard a voice it was the principal. ‘’All of you get back to class!”  it felt like school was jail.

We waited and waited but no one came are we going to be here forever ?

Lost on a Island

As I slowly open my eyes I find myself in the middle of the sea. I look ahead and I see a small Island then I paddle with my hands as fast as I can. Finally I approached the Island.  My eyes were glued to the pool of salt water. Suddenly The sun drops down ‘’what happened” , As I try to see what is ahead, I hear a growl in the bushes. Then the sun came up. I walk slowly to the jungle the first thing I see is coconuts hanging from a huge tree.”I need that coconut” As I shake the tree as hard as I can. I felt something on my back it was a sizzling snake. As I run deeper into the jungle, I heard the growl again but this time. I knew what it was a lion. without warning  the lion leap out of nowhere. I run out of the jungle it felt like the ion kick me out of a party. Then I sat down on the shimmering sand thinking what to do next. I decided to build a shelter. As the sun went down one at a time stars pop out to see me and they the shimmered  like a diamonds. It  felt like days were weeks. Suddenly I felt a drop of water it was rain. It felt like the could were crying. As the moon went away the sun came up and welcome me. As I get up to get some wood to make a boat I feel the coat of bark on the trees. I jump with happiness to finally get of this Iland. At once I pull the boat near to the sea i hop on the boat and sail    off ‘’finally I am free,

               

                                                         
                                                                      wetland
   

As I approached the wetland my eyes were drawn towards the slimy mud. The mud oozed into my shoes. As I looked around. I heard the birds singing to me. I took one step I smelt the fresh clean wind through my nose. Once I looked up the tree it was standing as strong as a table. Next I feel the rough bark on the tree. I take one more step I felt the soggy mud coming up to my knees. I see the water crashing into the huge rocks. I taste the fresh air going through my mouth. The mud felt like quink sand.